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My latest poem~~Death

Post by Amber on May 27th 2010, 9:36 pm

This is my most recent poems...It's just how i've been feeling lately


This isn't a surprise
You can feel it coming
it's like a lion;
you can't control it


It's scary, maddening
It's something you try to forget
It's what you don't think about
what you try to forget


But it comes
It happens to everyone sometime
You can't control when
But it happens, you can feel it, so can others


Death
The word so harsh, so cold
No meaning, no feeling
So indescribable


It's going to happen
You can't control it
It's coming by surprise
But not to you


While you're in that bed
Waiting to go
Everyone is crying
except you


You've had your times
Had your laughs
had your time
Nothing good ever lasts


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Post by wetpaper93 on May 27th 2010, 9:40 pm

Wow, Nice job, really nice job. I like it a lot

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Post by Desperate on May 27th 2010, 10:59 pm

Amber...Wow...this is kind of depressing me Sad
Hehe ^.^; I love it thou.
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Post by Amber on May 28th 2010, 11:43 am

Thanks...I've been feeling so sad lately that most of my poems have been depressing or about death as of lately..


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Post by RpUr4LiFe on May 28th 2010, 11:44 am

Aw, what's been bothering you Amber?
I love that poem...it's so..poetic XD
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Post by Snobothehobo on May 28th 2010, 1:30 pm

D: Good poem, but what's wrong?
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Post by Amber on May 28th 2010, 1:38 pm

Thanks Smiley

Bleh, my 18 year old kitty is going to die soon....I can just feel it.. And I haven't been sleeping lately, and have been really busy...and I just sort of feel sad :/


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Post by Snobothehobo on May 28th 2010, 1:41 pm

I'm sorry, Amber. Sad I hope your kitty is okay. Sad
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Post by Amber on May 28th 2010, 2:20 pm

Thanks <3
And I know she won't be OK...I don't mean to sound like a freak, but I just feel like she's going to die soon.


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Post by Snobothehobo on May 28th 2010, 2:29 pm

It's okay. You're not a freak. I hope you're wrong, though, and that she doesn't die soon. Sad
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Post by OMGITSDAVID on May 29th 2010, 10:17 pm

Aw, I hope your wrong Ambie!
Lovely poem though!
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