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Memorial day poem

Post by Desperate on May 14th 2010, 11:09 pm

Ok, this is not my best poetry, or even CLOSE! I'm serious, I write way better than this, but we had to write a poem for school, and I do terrible under pressure T.T;


Today is memorial day
To celebrate when, from close and away
The veterans who gave
and were very brave, yet some left in the grave

So on Memorial day
We all conjoin and say
a heartfelt thanks
and we close all the banks

To show out appreation
We put on the Dandelion
on their graves
for their special day

Without their shield, it may all be different
the world would be bent
we may not be free
because not every one can agree

But they made the difference
So we show a special flag tgat reprecense
What they did for me
them and all of the different armies.
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Post by Twilight on May 15th 2010, 10:06 pm

Nice. Very thoughtful and....well...meaningful.
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Post by Desperate on May 16th 2010, 11:05 pm

Thanks for your post grin
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Post by ursuchasnore on May 17th 2010, 12:29 am

That's pretty...All the words of it are correct.
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Post by RpUr4LiFe on May 18th 2010, 7:54 pm

That's beautiful (: Nice job
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Post by Spaz on May 24th 2010, 10:57 pm

That's sweet Smiley
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