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Post by Amber on May 5th 2010, 5:52 pm

I don't want your sympathy
You can't understand
I just need you to listen
As close as you can

I'm telling you something
I'm opening up
Just listen
please don't interrupt

I know this doesn't mean much
I know you don't care

But please don't cry
Don't even fret
Don't make any drama
We've still got time yet

You pretend that it's all okay
But I hear sorrow in your voice
With every word that you say
Just don't give up
There's always some hope

I realize how this may sound
coming from me
But everything will be OK
It's not always easy to see

Gaze into the night
You cannot see
The light is fading
It becomes scary

Then The dawn appears
And you regain your sight
It's a miracle
It's just ending the night

Not everything happens so perfectly
But if you give it a try it will
Just Take my hand
And you will see

Now I'm done
And it's your turn to share
I'll try to just listen
I promise to be there

Just don't pretend
Don't play any games
I was honest
I expect the same

embarassed
So....eh....any comments/suggestions?


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Re: Just listen

Post by Nikki on May 6th 2010, 5:11 pm

I like it. Nice job.
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Post by WikiIsSoNotKewl on May 7th 2010, 5:32 pm

Pretty. Nice job (:
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Re: Just listen

Post by Spaz on May 19th 2010, 1:34 am

Nice, it's very pretty.
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Post by ursuchasnore on May 23rd 2010, 9:26 pm

Beautiful. And real. I love it, nice job.
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Re: Just listen

Post by Goku on May 26th 2010, 4:31 am

ah awesome and lovely i loved it Smiley

nice work grin

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Re: Just listen

Post by Desperate on May 28th 2010, 10:36 pm

Nice, It's pretty.
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Re: Just listen

Post by OMGITSDAVID on June 17th 2010, 11:30 pm

Aw, that's well written and nice, Amber.
4.5/5 just because nothing is ever perfect.
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Re: Just listen

Post by Sally123 on June 22nd 2010, 8:25 pm

Enjoyable read - nice job Smiley
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