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From seed to friendship!

Post by sillybung on November 17th 2009, 8:55 pm

A poem written by ME! lol





From Seed To Friendship



A friend is like a flower

A flower yes indeed

Beacause when a friendship first begins

It begins as a seed

The sun is shinging brightly on the patted earth beneath

Your friendship is growing stronger

With every move and whisp

Grey clouds fill the sky

Anger starts to form

The Clouds began to cry

And sorrow filled the air

Don't worry about the fights

They will be over soon

But look at your flower!

It sure looks grown

Your friendship is now complete

With the sun and the rain

.........

Seed to friendship





About this poem

I wrote this poem for my friend, she always inspires me. I want to remind her that when Our friendship first began we were happy like the sun. We had some fights which represents the rain. But in the end our friendship grew and grew all because of those happy times and sad times! just like a flower
If you liked this poem check out from a distance!!


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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by Amber on November 18th 2009, 9:23 am

I LOVE it GREAT job!
You should write more!


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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by Sally123 on November 18th 2009, 9:29 am

Yes, Its Wonderful And Inspireing Also. You Should Write More Poems
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Post by sillybung on November 18th 2009, 4:18 pm

Smiley Thanks, I like writing poetry but I take my time to write poems, This one took me 1 hour!! YA!
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Post by norih on November 18th 2009, 4:39 pm

WOW! Only 1HOUR! THATS FAST! Lol! That is GREAT!


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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by sillybung on November 18th 2009, 5:31 pm

hee hee! Thanks!!!
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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by Nikki on November 22nd 2009, 7:24 pm

its Really good! I hope you write more soon!
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Post by norih on November 22nd 2009, 9:20 pm

so do i!


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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by ursuchasnore on November 24th 2009, 12:07 am

That's Really Good, Write more soon.
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Post by norih on November 24th 2009, 5:20 pm

I LOVEEEEEEE it!


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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by Twilight on December 12th 2009, 12:49 am

Its amazing!
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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by gagaATTACK on December 25th 2009, 12:32 pm

Same as all said above ^

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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by everybodysing! on December 27th 2009, 2:28 pm

Read this again, and still LOVE it!
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Post by craig1985 on January 3rd 2010, 2:29 pm

Hey i love the poem and i hope i get to read more of your poems soon

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Post by cooltwig on January 8th 2010, 5:27 pm

nice one

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Re: From seed to friendship!

Post by OMGITSDAVID on June 19th 2010, 1:05 pm

That's pretty Smiley 5/5
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